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It was alright

A few of the parts were actually pretty funny, and well animated. However some of the animation was still off by a bit, some tweens where they didn't belong and some places that could have used tweens. Some of the sound was off for some of the parts also.

Overall some good, some bad, some could have used a bit more work.

7/10 4/5

I thought it was interesting

I liked the style, and I always enjoy music videos.... well most of the time anyways.

I liked this 9/10 5/5

RedHotPoker responds:

Cheers marth. Your a hero.

Just as amazing as the others, but better!!

Still a pinnacle of animation and style.

Hmmmm....

It has potential,it seems a little choppy at some points but that's not that hard to fix.

And Sounds effects are veeery important in sprite movies.

overall 5/10

It's alright.

It could be better, but you need to focus on the art abit, there are areas that seemed to be done in a lazy fashion, which could be really easily fixed.

The concept is interesting, and I like that but maybe you should try some more animated concepts for the contests they have, since it seemed like the music was just filler.

The music and sound were pretty good, however that noise when you press the button gets rather annoying.

6/10 overall, it really just need a bit of work.

Poti05 responds:

Thanks for rating.

Well....

It's not bad, but nothing personal but this doesn't deserve its own series tab, if your lucky it might get into the kirby collection but thats as far as it will go.

I would suggest working on the smoothness of your animations (it was a little choppy) It's an ok flash but just don't feel your self deserving of a series spot (you'll be let down by the result)

3/5 and 6/10

Well.......

It was pretty good for a first try, and it had some humor in it but it was just not very wow, don't get me wrong but you should have put more then 2 days into it.(also a little short.)

hmmm....

well it was ok but here are some suggestions:
add some sound effects and maybe some newgrounds audio portal music

There was much more you could have done with the characters (I mean I hate naruto but there were plenty of other things he could have done, and you skipped ichigo's base form)

Also I would suggest making it longer and giving people a choice of victories (not that I didn't like your humor it's just...)

Well overall I gave it a 3/5 and a 6/10 well thanks for listening

VenomX14 responds:

WEll I thought of that but then some other guy did it and I thought it would look like im just copying him. Thanks for the suggestions though ^_^

hmm...

just noticing that these two video look very alike....
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /403261

woah.....

no....just woah...

Fuck energy drinks, apples are better!

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